Wednesday, March 21, 2007

My Lover's Eyes

My lover’s eyes are nothing like the sea,
His lips, poutier than mine, appear brass
He isn’t stacked, my man is more like a tree.
His hair sticks up like a field full of grass.

Some men have skin like dark wood, but not he.
Truly, paler than snow is his cheek’s hue.
His mouth has the taste of sour coffee,
Thinly disguised by an Altoid or two.

Not rich and deep is his voice, but if loud,
He goes high, like a mosquito whining.
He doesn’t walk regally, tall and proud,
Rather, his gait is hunched, from hours typing.

I may laugh at him when he struts his stuff,
But his love for me is sexy enough.

1 comment:

Anonymous said...

That's total niftiness! You have to submit it to the poetry contest. That sonnet of Shakespeare's was always my favorite by far. Me likey.